Major notes were that the held frame was too long, which is true. A suggestion that the lightning should arc straight to the figure, and not have that frame where it is half way there (I totally agree) and that the lightning could do more, especially if the held frame is going to last so long. I agree as well. Overall though, I was very pleased with how this turned out.
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